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Photography Photography \ Nature | 01/02/08 @518 | oldskool87 | Comments critiques (26) | Views views (492)


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some old work done last summer :p
 
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Avatar blackshad

 01/02/08 @560

this abstract is masterfully composed i think
textures and colors are perfect
but it REALLY needs to be cleaned of the noise / poor image quality :)
did you shoot in high iso, or was it heavily cropped ?
 
Avatar oldskool87

 01/02/08 @603

@  blackshad: the noise is because of a to short exposer time (1/125) => a to dark image => lightend up.... also becouse the the original file was 3280x2454 and it had to be sharped after resize :(
 
Avatar Millink

 01/02/08 @705

Aaah Very nice, and GOOD lightning!
Whats the exif data for this one?
Maybe the contrast needs to ga a little higher, to accentuate the whiter areas... The small DOF is a good decision I think, any bigger would make it less interesting, cause we would be able to look directly IN the flower... Not pretty that way, but with a smaller DOF your safe :)

I removed the noise, but I pushed it to the max ^^ This way your picture becomes very blurred, and gives a weird effect to the photo.
http://i9.tinypic.com/6lj0c1u.jpg
Weird, and a bit artificial maybe, but interesting :) I hope you dont mind I borrowed your picture... Its deleted from my PC now anyway.

I like it, but clean up the noise, or resize it better. Its not always necessary to sharpen the image. Look at the final result and think: is this what I want? And undo the sharpening if needed :)

Well, so far for my 'wise' story. Its not like I know anything about it ^^ Just trying to comment :)
 
Avatar ersen-t

 01/02/08 @800

good textures.
well done.
 
Avatar Roadrunner

 01/02/08 @819

Great abstractish plant!
Millink's version is better noise-wise, but it killed the colour. You need a combination for a perfect shot.
 
Avatar yvy

 01/02/08 @835

quite nice. i don't get all this picking. i agree about the noise-it should be cleaned a bit, but besides it's pretty ok.
btw Millink noise correction is a bit too much to the other side.
 
Avatar cupcake

 01/02/08 @872

I agree with Roadrunner.
I like the lighting also. Very soft.
I think a black frame might help.
 
Avatar oldskool87

 01/02/08 @873

thanks all :)

 yvy but it right the noise reduction is a bit to mutch... it affects the color and shape imo... i tried it too but prefered the noisey one ;)

@Elite cupcake: i tried black but the picture seemed to dark imo :|

and btw it's corn
 
Avatar ThruMyEyez

 01/02/08 @924

A wonderful abstract!
 
Avatar mamoun

 01/02/08 @935

Great work Alin :)
 
Avatar ARZILLIER66

 01/03/08 @015

Nice abstract shot :)
 
Avatar Jafus

 01/03/08 @067

Excellent abstract!!
 
Avatar Madanapale

 01/03/08 @109

Beautiful!...great abstract Alin!
Carlos
 
Avatar flyhart

 01/03/08 @612

Nice shot, but the noise is really bothering me. But my friend millink got carried away with NeatImage :p the picture is a bit to dark, I would edit that. Because a longer shutter time is not an option, you lose a lot of colour that way.

Keep it up
 
Avatar Daykan

 01/03/08 @817

Great capture!!!
 
Avatar RvascoF

 01/04/08 @808

Great compo and color, well done...!!!
 
Avatar herrwestphal

 01/04/08 @818

Very very good work. Very eyecatching and I love these soft waves.
 
Avatar purplerose

 01/05/08 @508

Nice work. :)
 
Avatar curlyhair

 01/06/08 @564

I like it. nice and smooth :p I just don't like this grain on the image. Nice shot!
 
Avatar viridi

 01/06/08 @734

wow )) +10
 
Avatar Fuchsia

 01/06/08 @847

love the abstracts and this is perfect!!
great texture too
+10
 
Avatar moserArtist

 01/07/08 @807

I would clean it up with a noise reduction tool as suggested.

Nice close-up!

Looks a bit dark.
 
Avatar Maidith

 01/08/08 @854

very beautiful, almost like a painting
 
Avatar killadore

 01/09/08 @401

i actually like the noise. think it adds to the image in this case instead of making it look poor. works with the simplicity of it. good stuff
 
Avatar LiddleLarsen

 01/10/08 @981

Think I have to agree with Patrick on this, but still a great photo!
 
Avatar Passenger

 01/20/08 @686

Love this one!
Great work, I don't mind about the grain!
 
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