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Photography Photography \ Architecture | 02/13/08 @384 | oldskool87 | Comments critiques (24) | Views views (487)


.mausoleum
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Taken in, Foeni, a village in Timis County, Banat, near the city of Timisoara.
 
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Avatar moserArtist

 02/13/08 @437

Powerful architectural composition!

I think you need a little more space on the righhandside and make also sure you center it perfectly! :)

I would also try to take off a little of the dark areas of the sky which is still very strong!
 
Avatar oldskool87

 02/13/08 @521

@Elite moserArtist: thanks Patrick... about the space and composition... i didn't want to compos it simetricaly... regarding the clouds i think the darkness adds to the mood :|

let's see what the others think :p
 
Avatar Wallace

 02/13/08 @593

Excellent dramatic looking shot

I agree with Patrick about the cropping as
the initial composition is symmetrical and so is the structure of the building.

The tight cropping on the right seems therefore a bit distracting;)

+ 9
 
Avatar ARZILLIER66

 02/13/08 @669

Beautiful details Alin!
cool color and textures, agree about the crop comment!
 
Avatar Madanapale

 02/13/08 @683

Beautiful work Alin!
Great mood and details!
Carlos
 
Avatar Roadrunner

 02/13/08 @721

First thing that caught my eye: its not perfectly symmetrical. ;)
If you dont want it to be, then it's too close to symmetrical.
Very beautiful other than that.
 
Avatar IraMelanox

 02/13/08 @767

beautiful :) +10
 
Avatar Daykan

 02/13/08 @807

WOWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!! This is really incredible!!!
Awesome composition, great choice of colors!! Awesome capture, dude!!
 
Avatar ogu

 02/13/08 @899

Spooky ! well done
 
Avatar ersen-t

 02/13/08 @901

good shot.
the sky looks great.
agree with Moser about more space.
 
Avatar Vasco

 02/14/08 @551

I liked the shot, still I think you shouldn't have cropped the main subject! Ok, so you weren't aiming for a centered/symmetrical composition, even so the building could be entirely on the photo.
 
Avatar cupcake

 02/14/08 @881

Beautiful work Alin!

:)
 
Avatar Passenger

 02/14/08 @890

Nice shot, I like the perspective!
It is almost symmetrical, ...perhaps you could work on that a little more. And a black or grey frame would be more suitable imo, but thats just a matter of taste.
 
Avatar Jafus

 02/14/08 @925

Wonderful perspective & details & mood!!:)
Agree with master moser about symmetry.;)
 
Avatar ThruMyEyez

 02/16/08 @082

A very good capture. I would have tried moving to one side a bit to get more of an angled shot. I'd also try this in B&W. Nice work!
 
Avatar MsMichelleLynn

 02/16/08 @427

I love the sky and the tones in this photo. It seems a bit tilted to the left. If you are trying to create a perfect symmetry, you'll need to rotate it a bit clockwise and re-crop.

Nice work.
 
Avatar Andy--Jones

 02/16/08 @568

that is one impressive resting place!!! Wicked photograph.
 
Avatar mrhollow

 02/16/08 @988

Beautiful tones, though I'm not hot on the composition. I like that it's not perfectly symmetric, but it shouldn't be so tightly cropped on the right if that's the design I think.

I really like your work.

Cheers,
Aaron
 
Avatar LiddleLarsen

 02/17/08 @832

Really cool, only cropped slightly too tight on the righ hand side, but not a big problem for me :)
 
Avatar Almost-Human

 02/18/08 @609

the problem with this image is that your viewpoint was not straight on in the first place.
I like the image but the top of the structure is soft on the focus and the sky looks sharp ? its a bit over processed for my taste..
 
Avatar herrwestphal

 02/18/08 @641

Great mood and textures.
Nice shot. Crop looks a little tight to the right hand side, imo.
 
Avatar anastasia

 02/20/08 @467

I agree with Moser comment. A strong capture!
 
Avatar bstsk

 02/28/08 @804

I like it, I take it the vampire thing was true about Romania then?
 
Avatar yvy

 04/09/08 @877

nice shot. perhaps a bit too muchly processed.
 
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